如果你用了这五种表达，那简直就是分分钟激怒考官的节奏，尤其是当你在写作的时候。我们还附上了雅思易错词汇。祝烤鸭们顺利通过雅思！

1、You are trying too hard！

大难词、不合适的习语、长难句

许多同学学会了一大堆的大难词，费劲儿的记住了，想在考试中用，可是歪果仁都不常用的难词你却写了，用的不正确不合适，词不对意。大概就是如果你是语文老师，看到了这些的文章的感受：

还有就是习语用的不准确，要不就是一个习语全世界考生都用！大概所有雅思考生都会写“A coin has two sides”或者“A double -edged sword”..吧。

长难句写的不对：好几个主语和动词还没有连接词、没有主语、动词形式不正确等。这么不地道的写法，考官能不烦吗？

Simple is the Best（看个栗子）：

The CEO tenure at the company was abbreviated due to his reluctance to integrate more females into upper managerial posts，thereby drawing the ire of the Board who consequently relieved him of his duties.

首先我要说这个句子是正确的，但是如果你能写出这样的句子来，那么你就把这篇文章关了，直接去考试吧！你的水平考个7都算低的~

但是，hin多同学是试着想写这样的句子，但是写不出来。所以你会出现hin多hin多错误，在没有把握的情况下，就把句子缩短，写简单句：

The CEO's time was cut short because he wouldn't promote women to top positions，which angered the Board who then fired him.

哦！你看懂了吧......

再说接下来几点之前，我们再来看个栗子：

Topic： Parents makes the best teacher. 就是说家长是孩子最好的老师，你同意不同意？

.......（Introduction 忽略，但是先假设这是一篇同意话题观点的文章）

Firstly，parents know their child best，including what he likes and doesn't like，such as books he likes to read ，or favorite science topics.Parents can also talk to the child's teacher and find out from them how to hlep him at home. They can also monitor how much TV he watches. Cutting down on this might help his concentration.

就以这个片段为例，说说大家常出现的问题，也是考官一看就不会给你高分的原因！