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是的!这篇经验主要教你雅思写作如何上7分

中英网  www.uker.net  2016-06-29   来源: 转载   编辑: marieke

编者按:众所周知,雅思总分上7.5不是那么难,可是四个单项都要过7却不是那么容易。无数总分过7.5的勇士为了某一个或某两个单项过7而不断的参加雅思考试,刷单项分。

题目:Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

仅以第一个主体段,即消费者在何等程度上受广告影响,为例

加黑体是我写完之后修改的或者是注释

Inundated with advertisements in daily life, consumers are influenced without any conscious.(总起句,表明同意的态度,更simple一点比较好?

自改1 there is little doubt that consumers are persuaded by adverts without any conscious) This can be obviously demonstrated with the case of junk food targeting children and cigarette for young people. (这应该算是example 应放在detail的后面)

(自改1 detail-->it is a common sight of attractive images on most of adverts. Exampleàthis is particularly evident in case of junk food and cigarette targeting children or juveniles, who can hardly resist the temptation of mouthwatering hamburgers and fried chips on display and then buy them without thinking)Advertisements of these products which are actively unhealthy are persuasive by presenting some attractive virtual images, like mouthwatering hamburgers and fried chips, thus urging youngsters to buy them without a second thought.//

Products endorsed by celebrities can also be memorable and influential.(point-->similarly, advertising of products endorsed by celebrities could also be misleading in some ways)

That is to say, if Miranda Kerr is using a brand of shampoo in a television commercial, countless number of girls will be likely to follow suit since most people tend to imitate the lifestyle of famous stars.

(example) A further illustration is that when you are watching a movie in a theater, you would possibly have no idea that the latest goods are also on display. You would possibly buy these products the next time when wondering in a supermarket because you’ve already got familiar with their names.(三个方面果然比较多了…直接上example会不会不太好啊,自己的逻辑更倾向于example-explain分析原因,算了还是老实改改吧

details-->subsequently, there are also less obvious categories of advertising, say billboards by the road side, flyers on the streets. Example-->A further illustration is that when you are watching a movie in a theater, you would possibly have no idea that the latest goods are also on display.)

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